Saturday, January 01, 2011

i'm a juvenile

I recognize that I make mistakes.


  I'd cliff dive,
    an apathetic and self-disregarding swan,
      held to a breathless, nailbiting
flawless entry, barely a ripple,

                      into a swimming pool of sorrow;
     but who am I to demand your attention?

    I'm a parody, myself...
still licking the sting from a relationship,
        barely the length of a fling.

4 comments:

Marian said...

this is beautiful.

ian said...

thank you

Kerry O'Connor said...

This is one to rip out the heart still beating. It is beautiful in its clarity of thought and meaning but over-powering in its emotional weight.

ian said...

thank you